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Remind me to stop joining RP groups. This is for the group :iconcircus-darkrai:

I'm probably gonna change him from Sword Swallower to Scary Clown to Clown 'cause he's ain't that scary. Plus, he looks more awesome that way. XD

So yeah, I have been waiting for this movie called "The Great Gatsby" so I could damn watch it. I have seen the movie trailer in the TV for like 20 times already and I was (strangely) inspired to edit Andre's history and looks. Of course, there aren't clowns in the movie but yeah, whatever. >w<

I have typed in useless stuff in the trivia section because I'm bored. =w=




"It's funny to see others happy."



Name: Andre Fitzberg

Age: 28

Gender: Male

Pokémon: Whimsicott :iconwhimsicottplz:

Nature: Naughty

Characteristic: Likes to thrash about

Ability: Prankster

Job: Clown

Faction: Etoile

Wish:

"You know, I have longed to get someone to enjoy my comedy acts... You know, without anyone telling me that my jokes are horrible and that it is more of an insult."

In short, he just wanted someone who can enjoy little silly antics. But what he doesn't know is his little innocent wish could turn into a dark nightmare. See his history for the results of his wish.

Personality:

+ Convivial
+ Optimistic
+ Energetic
+ Persistent
+ Unassuming

With a lot of social parties inside hi own home, he became festive. He would mostly wear colorful clothes during any kind of party. He thinks positive no matter what happens even if a certain event goes horribly wrong. Energetic and Lively, he would just run around randomly or doing comedy acts in front of any pokemon. He never gives up either if its a fight or a show. He never brags or judges anybody by its appearances. He's practically a good companion for everyone. He never lies or cheats, and this might become a problem if you befriend him.

- Foolhardy
- Impatient
- Indecisive
- Interfering
- Perverse

He usually never thinks about his actions and its consequences so he ends up getting injured or getting into fights. He won't stop walking around back and forth as he cannot be kept waiting. He is not great at making decisions and often making his peers make the decision for him. He also seeks the approval of his friends even if it kills him. He would butt in any conversation or act as a distraction in a task or mission. He would say anything what's on his mind, thinking they are mostly right in which it's not.

History:

As a little Cottonee, he was hyper and cheerful; always the one in the family to make everyone smile. The only problem is, he has a huge imagination. A VERY big imagination. He would often tell stories about impossible events. Of course, since he was a little kid, his parents pretended to believe in his wild stories. And boy, he liked that. Not only he told tall stories but he also pulled pranks and make pokemon laugh. But unfortunately, as he grew older, they didn't appreciate the jokes and stories he was telling, and the pranks he was pulling. Everyone seemed to hate him. Why? His jokes we're about their past lives, the pranks became more brutal, and the stories weren't true, at least to what they have thought. He was appreciated no more.

During his teenage years, his father offered him a waiter job at the family restaurant and he thought about it. If he accepted the job, maybe pokemon would take notice at him. He then said yes and off to the working world he is. Unfortunately, he didn't expect that the customers would be so... Rich! And rude! But he didn't give up on trying to entertain them. He would tell corny jokes and perform comedy acts but to no avail. Nobody laughed at his jokes or his acts. To make matters worse, his father kept is piling up work for him. He hated his work, he didn't even want to be a waiter in the first place.

One night, he was alone at the restaurant since it was his turn to watch over the family restaurant. It was quite boring, he looked around to see the circus has come to the city. Oh joy for him, he had ever wanted to see a real live circus. And as he took a seat, he marveled at the comedy acts and how everyone was laughing at them. He wanted that! He wanted people to laugh at him for his acts.

As he was about to leave, he was greeted by a tall and mysterious pokemon approached him. At first, Andre backed away slowly, thinking he might kill him. But as soon as the pokemon spoke these words: "I can sense you wish for something... You are craving for a desire...". Andre was amazed, how the heck does he know that? The pokemon introduced himself as Mr. Dark and asked what did he desired the most. "Well, Mr. Dark, I've always wanted to make other pokemon laugh about my jokes and my comedy acts. I want that!" He beamed. Then, Mr. Dark smirked. "Okay, I will grant that wish ON ONE CONDITION: you will work at the circus..." He said. And Andre quickly said yes. But even a simple and childish wish could turn into a horrible nightmare.

One day on his day-off from work, he and his friends we're all fooling around as they drank beer all except for Andre who is not fond of drinking alcoholic beverages. He then starts telling a joke but none of his friends get it but instead, one of them said "Is he insulting about my family?!". Andre was surprised that his friend actually asked that. He tried to deny it but his friend just glared at him saying "If you think you can mess with me, you've got that all WRONG!" His friend started kicking him to the ground while his other friends are no help whatsoever as they just watched Andre get pounded up. As soon as they were finished, he was left with big bruises and wounds. What did he do? What did he said? He didn't know! He and his friends never spoke to each other again after the incident.

Weeks have passed and he decided to quit his waiter job to become a famous comedian. He even declared it to his father who disapproved his decision. To prove his father was wrong, Andre decided to perform some comedy acts and tell jokes in front of the customers, big mistake. He started telling a small joke about his father. What he didn't know is that he was actually telling if he's father would die, he wouldn't have a care in the world. And BAM! His father had a sudden cardiac arrest without any warning. Andre finally noticed his father but it was too late, he was dead. He went over to his father and there he wept, regretting what he had said about his own father, the one who raised him when he was still a Cottonee but then, he realized something "Wait a minute, he didn't have any problems with his heart. Why did he-?!" He then remembered a certain nightmare pokemon granting him a wish. The more he thought about it, the more furious he gets; blaming Mr. Dark for his father's sudden death.

At the night of the very day his father died, he came searching for the pokemon. "WHERE ARE YOU?! SHOW YOURSELF!" He snarled and as if by magic, Mr. Dark appeared right before him. "Why did you killed my father?!" He demanded, tears streaming down from his eyes. "Ah, I did grant you your wish. And now, you must pay your debt to me..." He nodded. "Debt?" The Whimsicott tilted his head in confusion, what did the Darkrai said again? "You must work for me. In Circus Darkrai. Forever you shall be a clown." The Darkrai smirked as they both vanished into thin air before Andre even responded at all.

Likes and Dislikes:

+ Chocolate
+ Other clowns
+ Fooling around
+ Money

- People telling him what to do
- People unsatisfied
- Snobby and Rich Pokemon
- Alcoholic Beverages

Move set:

Hurricane :iconflyingtypeplz:

Leech Seed :icongrasstypeplz:

Toxic (TM Moves) :iconpoisontypeplz:

Natural Gift (Egg Move) :iconnormaltypeplz:

Trivia

:bulletgreen: Despite being a clown, he decides to keep his waiter outfit and color dyed it gold. Even offstage, he prefers wearing his waiter uniform.

:bulletgreen: He came from a wealthy family and he regrets it sometimes.

:bulletgreen: He's bisexual and he's proud of it.

:bulletgreen: If he had a birthday, it's on May 20.

:bulletgreen: In Pokemon Canon, he is in Castelia City. If it's not, he's in New York.

:bulletgreen: He's 5'7 feet tall. He's pretty tall for a Whimsicott.
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PixieParrot's avatar

Hello, I'll kindly critique your app for you! Please don't take me as a harsh critic, I'd love to see your character make it into the group.

 

*points*  A lot of what I was going to say is already said by Serenadex.  But I'll add on to her.

 

Your text is too small.  Its really hard to read.  I had to zoom in to see it.  Please, for the sake of everyone's eyes, make it bigger.

 

Why did his jokes suddenly become so brutal?  I feel like I missed something.  When did he decided that rude jokes were better than...well...non-rude jokes?

 

And, while I am repeating what was said below, I do agree, why the heck did his wish backfire?  He just said he didn't want to tell insulting jokes...yet he tells insulting jokes.  While Darkrai is shrewd he does fulfill the wish in one degree or another-while finding a loophole of some sort for it to backfire.  And honestly, I don't see how wishing to tell insulting jokes can backfire into telling insulting jokes-its confusing.  Plus why would he want to work as a clown?  He'd get beat up to no end if went into THAT line of work.

 

Also the affect of the wish is confusing.  So whatever he jokes about comes true...or is twisted...?  I don't get it.  I think you should try to re-word the wish a bit and re-think what the affects are.  I also think you should explain the wish in the wish section in greater detail as well so the reader won't be confused.  Maybe when he tells jokes the people won't stop laughing...disrupting his comedy routine?  Or maybe every word he says people think its the funniest thing in the world and won't shut up enough to hear what he's saying.  Something more postive than negative.

 

So just re-work the wish a bit and you're set.  Good luck!~