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PKMN Armonia App - Violet by CaramelCreampuff PKMN Armonia App - Violet by CaramelCreampuff
So far, I have decided to make a new app but I will retain the same history, just gonna tweak it for a bit. >w<

Oh, this is for :iconpkmn-armonia:

EDIT: OMG! She got in! I mean, I got in! I mean... Whatever! XD I'll be editing her app soon since she's sorted in the Rosalind. >w< I'm open for RPs, guys. Send me a note if y'all interested. :3



:bulletblue: Name

Violet Fox

:bulletblue: Age

15 (joined Armonia at the age of 14)

:bulletblue: Gender

Female

:bulletblue: Pokémon

Vaporeon :iconvaporeonplz:

:bulletblue: Birthday

April 2

:bulletblue: Height

4'10"

:bulletblue: Weight

67 lbs.

:bulletblue: Nature

Docile

:bulletblue: Ability

Water Absorb

:bulletblue: Hometown

Hearthome City

:bulletblue: Personality

+ Creative
+ Cheerful
+ Loyal
+ Outgoing
+ Playful

Very imaginative and resourceful, Violet would draw them all in her little sketchbook. She tends to get exciteable over many things especially when she meets someone new or when she discovers something new. Despite being childish and very playful, she tries her best to socialize by the means of observing others and mimicking them. Very optimistic, she usually sees the brighter sides of situation even if it's not really there.

- Attention Seeker
- Forgetful
- Gullible
- Lazy
- Stubborn

On various occasions when everybody ignores her, she would sometimes cause mischief thus, making herself quite a troublemaker. She tends to forget things and often whines when one of her belongings got missing but in truth, she forgot where she put it. She is easily fooled by many pokemon tricksters and can be quite naive about most sticky situations. Very lazy, she doesn't usually take much interest in studying and instead either draw or just listen to music.


:new: During her first term in the school, she was a little awkward with pretty much about everything but eventually, she made some friends but no enemies (thank god). Over that time, she had learnt lessons about being self-confident and finding true beauty within herself. Not to mention, to put up from being constantly tormented by her former classmates from her previous school. From her former awkward and weird girl she was before, to the silly and creative girl she is today. However, she also developed her more... Vain side now, thanks to her cousin from St. Mortiel. She also gained the more... Mischievous side of hers.

However, deep inside of her, she is still insecure about being around pokemon whom she thinks thats better than her. Even her love life is affecting her, seeing several love couples around Armonia made her feel like she wasn't meant for men at all.

:bulletblue: History

Violet is the only child of a Floatzel father and a Vaporeon mother living in Hearthome City in the Sinnoh Region. As an Eevee, she didn't have much problems with both social and school life so her parents weren't worried that much. That is until she hit high school.

Her one and true passion was arts and hopes one day to become either a cartoonist or an illustrator of some sort. She would doodle on a small notebook about what goes on her mind. She would go make mini comics about her life and such. And pretty much, that's a big problem during class hours. She draws during classes that she ain't paying attention to the lessons, much to the teachers' dismay.

Thanks to her habit on drawing during classes, her grades gone for a downhill. And since she is a slow learner, she wouldn't be able to catch up with the lessons. So in order to make her catch up, her parents hired a tutor for her with a name of "Carlton", and Violet didn't like the idea so far. For the first few days that they have met up, she couldn't get along with the tutor as he was strict and often scolds her for not listening as she was gazing around, not paying attention. She even told her parents about her little situation but they refused to stop it.

Now, one day during yet another tutoring with Carlton, she was caught red-handed as she was doodling over a paper, not paying attention. Violet knew that she would scold her again but he just said this as he looked over her drawing, smiled a bit:

"Ah, I haven't noticed that you are quite a good artist. I know it is hard for you to pay attention to me as you may see me... Boring and strict. But, that's how self-discipline works. You have to try to resist temptations such as doodling or sleeping during class in order to reach your goals and ambition." He explained to her and this got Violet into deep thought. She didn't think of it that way, being self-discipline and such. The next few weeks, she began to study a bit harder and tries to pay attention to classes. And with the help of the tutor, her grades improved in a good way. She finally did what she needed to do and was proud of herself. And so as Carlton and her parents.

As soon as the summer vacation started, her parents then took a brochure about a school called The Armonia Institute wherein the educational facilities were in top-notch condition, the educational system could be easy and more understandable for their daughter, and well-organized dorms. They showed it to Violet as soon as they both got home and try to convince her that the Armonia Institute could be a good school for her.

At first, she refuses to be enrolled in an unfamiliar school to her. But then she thought about it a little about what it would turn out when she goes to a new school. And after a deep thinking about it, she had agreed to be enrolled there, promising to study hard to achieve her goals and pay attention to the classes.

:bulletblue: Summary characteristic

Impetuous & Silly

:bulletblue: Hobbies :new:

:bulletorange: Doodling in her sketchbook

It's usually her favorite pastime when there's nothing to do at home or in school. She would often doodle random stuff mostly hearts and flowers and other cute things. Though, her doodles aren't just regular doodles. These are more of small comics or clothes designs. Or perhaps, a new hairstyle for other people. Though, this hobby of hers is also a BIG problem during class hours. 

:new: :bulletorange: Hairstyling

After spending a bit of time with a few girls from the Rosalind House, she had a love for styling her hair and she would often have different hairdos every single day. And most possibly, she would be seen styling other people's hair. But with permission, of course!

:bulletblue: Level: :new: 30

:bulletblue: Moveset

:iconwatertypeplz: Water Gun

:iconwatertypeplz: Water Pulse

:iconwatertypeplz: Aqua Ring

:iconicetypeplz: Aurora Beam

:bulletblue: Favorite Berry Flavor

Dry

For a water pokemon who always swims around, she loves dry berries. Just dry berries, though, and not all dry food.

:bulletblue: House

Rosalind

:bulletblue: School Schedule

• History
• Battle
• Math (II)
• Writing
• Science
• Health & Sex Ed.
• Survival
• Art
• Home Economics
• Contest

:bulletblue: Extras

:new: A Look Into The Laughs & Loves Of Violet :new:

:bulletorange: She has a thing for Sawsbucks. Like she would go every single day there and order any pastry with a side of Caramel Milkshakes. And if there's no Sawsbucks nearby, she'll just have to find a cafe that serves the food that she likes. Though, if none at all, she'll go berserk! Nah, I'm kidding. But she craves for it and you should probably lead her to a nearby cafe as quickly as possible.

:bulletorange: Her wardrobe consists of plentiful of colorful outfits to choose from. She might proclaim herself as the Princess Of The Dorks but damn, she knows what suits her and what doesn't! However, if she is being asked for fashion advice, she tends to avoid answering those as the fear of screwing up her answer and put the blame on her.

:bulletorange: Back then, she used to be mistaken for a boy crossdressing as a girl, often being teased about it. It didn't bother her that much since she have seen lots of girls who look like that so... Yeah, she didn't care. That much.

:bulletorange: Despite her longing for a companion that is from the opposite gender, she is declared pansexual. Although, she secretly turns her interest for girls and ONLY girls. But this secret has yet to be spread. Though, if there's a boy having a crush on her, she'll be glad nonetheless. In short, she's pansexual demiromantic.

:bulletorange: Another secret that you should know is that she's a huge fan of Captain Unova. She and her Flareon cousin would always argue who would make a good leader for The Avengers Team. Though, they never ended up in any violent pokemon battles. I mean, its just a debate which superhero is the best, its just harmless.

:bulletorange: If she had a theme song, it would probably be to the song Popular by MIKA ft. Ariana Grande (m.youtube.com/watch?v=nmcdLOjG…

Real-Life Trivia

:bulletpurple: Originally, Violet was meant to be a Shiny Pikachu but then I scraped that idea off. Mainly because it's too bland for me. Yes, you heard me. Too bland.

:bulletpurple: Part of her personality was based on my part of my personality, insecure on the inside but happy-go-lucky on the outside. I made her like that because i want to know how would other people react to my character, and not just other characters.

:bulletblue: School Badges:

:bulletorange: Art Club Member Badge
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:iconbellberrystar:
bellberrystar Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014
TODAY IS HER BIRTHDAY?! BWAAAAA?! 

Happy Birthday! 
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:iconcaramelcreampuff:
CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Violet: Ah, thank you so much for the birthday greetings! >w< :iconyuihugplz:
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bellberrystar Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014
Rebecca: Y-you're welcome. >x< 
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UltraReplay Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
WOW! Congragulation Creampuff! You shall be praised. BECAUSE you are one of the luckiest who got in PKMN Armonia. But..have fun rping with them!
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Argh, I hope I would try to NOT be out of place in the group. ;w;
To be honest, I panicked a lot when it was the judging of the apps. ;w;
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UltraReplay Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
But I am really amazed! You have improved a lot. I am proud of you accepting in PKMN Armonia. Don worry. You can do it. I mean I think this group is amazing. There's no way you'll ignore it.
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Obviously, I'm not gonna ignore it. XD
Still, I can't believe that my OC wasn't a Mary-Sue or something. ;w;
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UltraReplay Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow! That is really tough to make a non mary sue! I mean I am amazed. I don think I can even do it. But eh. Shawn is my character therefore I don't need PKMN Armonia =w=
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Meh, my Armonia character is far from my own personality. lD
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UltraReplay Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
whoa o3o But overall I am proud of you becoming the members of PKMN Armonia. Hope you have fun!
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
yeah, I will. ;3;
If only they have Arnis class in the group. lD
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Sahara-Fang Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Student Artist
Vaporeon AND Katy Perry fan ;). I like her already :3
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Lol XD
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Deedlebug21 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I see your working very hard on ur app as well lol >wO
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Yep and hopefully, I'll get a recommendation from one of the members. XD
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Deedlebug21 Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Same, I want to ask my buds if they can recommend me was well-ill make sure(if I ever get in) to recommend u in u work so hard on ur app that u need to join in!!
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
And if I get in first, I'll try to recommend you too. XD
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Deedlebug21 Featured By Owner Jun 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*hugs u* >w<
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pokepk Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She look adorable hope you get in.
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks. X3
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PixieParrot Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hello! I'll kindly critique your app for you. Please don't take me as-oh you know the drill.

Your have a lot of run-on sentences. Try breaking them up with semi-colons and periods. You also switch between past and present tense-try to stay in one point in time, please.

Now for CC...um...uh...well...:iconthinkingplz:

Its the craziest thing. Your character seems to have such a well fleshed-out personality but yet she comes off to me as a Mary-Sue in her history. (Sorry...). Since your personality section is fine let's go over your history- (I'm going to be pretty blunt here)

She seems like the kind of person that can get away with anything. And that's a bad thing. She is portrayed like a bad influence, you seem to empathize all her bad traits and barely touch on any of her good traits. I know she has them but they're not mentioned in the history. If anything she comes off as a troublesome brat in the first few paragraphs. (Which I'm sure she's not, judging by her personality section).

Her run-in with Sarah and the drama that follows seems kind of out-of-the-blue and a weird way to get her into Armonia. I always avoid bullying in my stories out of fear that it'll come off as overly-tragic and depressing-and, honestly, that's what kind it seems like here. Everyone automatically seems to take her side (going into the "everyone loves" and "everyone hates" traits) and her parents don't seem to do anything with her and her attitude to school. Besides, I don't like the portrayal of the school board as "inexperienced". Were they in a bad neighborhood? Plus, the fault of the bullying would lie with the principal, not with the fact that the teachers can teach good or not. The ending is also confusing. Why were her parents mad at the school, exactly?

I would take the bullying part out. You know, her parents could just find the school on a flyer and show it to their daughter. There doesn't have to be some elaborate and complicated backstory just for her to find Armonia.

Just give her history a more relaxed feel to it. She lives with her family. She's the class clown. She tries hard to become a good artist. Instead of the bullying issue replace it with CC's dreams and inspirations. What does she want to do when she grows up? How does she try to achieve that goal? In your case I would try to steer away from the drama aspect. Empathize her good traits while still showing she has flaws.

To be on the safe side I would avoid mentioning pop culture things such as "Iron Man" and "Dairy Queen". Since this is a pokemon universe I highly doubt those things will exist. Rather, what some people do is make them into little pokemon puns. For instance, "Iron Mankey" and "Mootank Queen". That way the people still know what you're talking about and it fits into the pokemon world. (Plus its punny!).

Now for the issue of self-inserts...Esaino is right, Armonia said that they highly discorage those. If this is true and CC is based off of you I suggest, at this time, just not to mention it. At all. (Since the opening is now and you don't have time to create a new character). If you're concerned maybe you could change her interests around not to match yours. If it makes you feel better I didn't think about this aspect until I read the comments.

Good luck!~
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I re-typed her history and a bit at her extras. What do you think?

Iron Mankey, I always imagined Mankey being the Hulk. XD
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PixieParrot Featured By Owner Jun 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
(I just picked the first pokemon that came into my head that started with "M"...machop would probably work better C:)

Much better! You have the bare events down. Now give the story more detail. What is her relationship with her sister? Her parents? What do her parents do in order to make her a better student? (I'd imagine they'd get her a tutor or something). Maybe she creates the art club so she focus on her studies more. That would make sense and tie in to her school issues thing.

You still switch between past and present tense. You may want to fix that.

Sorry about being so strict earlier...
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh yay! I'll fill in the details soon.

Wait, what do you mean I switched between past and present tense? ^ ^'

Nah, it's fine. I like critiques like that. XD
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PixieParrot Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2013  Student Digital Artist
"going" to "gone", "was" to "is", etc. etc.

Your thing should all be in past tense. ("gone","was","had","drew", etc.)
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PixieParrot Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I mean "milktank"...heh heh.
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sweating Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love her shirt~
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Thanks. x3
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Esiano Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Mmm..I'm sorry I don't think self-inserts are allowed..It doesn't matter if you made yourself with a Pikachu with a different name if it's still intended to be you/a self insert. This group is made for OC's only. Sorry <:I
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I dont think it says on the rules or the faqs.
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Esiano Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I know know but..I'll check the chats and see what they say okay?
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I asked about that as well in the Rules journal. =3=
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Esiano Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah okay, I'll leave it to the mods to answer it cuz it's really not my place~
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Okay. But if I may ask, is the history sort of... Mary Sue like? Im just asking.TwT
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Esiano Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconminghideplz: I'm awful at critique..I really don't know to be honest. //is awful sorry OTL
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Oh, its fine. :iconmingplz:
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blu3b34r Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
I now see you in full Pokemon anthro form...

Good luck in the opening! XD
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
You now see me in a sexy pose... :iconheplz:

And you will see my true self. XD
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blu3b34r Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
XD Lan would never fall for a woman like you! ...Because he has Cute Charm ability! X3

I don't know why, but I have 3 bookworm OCs... One is a complete nerd, one is a fool out of love and has hints of falling in love with a certain Teddiursa! (Yes, I ship ChesterxMarcy...) and one is shier than the first one, but he's learning to be confident!
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
I would never fall in love with Lan. I got my own dude to praise. XD
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blu3b34r Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student General Artist
Lan would take advantage of his ability when he has a crush!
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CaramelCreampuff Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Not really gonna happen, bro.

BUT, CC would be single while Im sorta taken. XD
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